gotta feel sorry for henshin rider on this one... he's being attacked!
FANFICTION REVIEW:
Not bad for a first fanfic! Henshin Rider's characterization is more or less spot-on, though you lose a point or two for self-inserts/Mary Sues ;). Next time, try and let HR have a little fun! Kick a mecha-butt or two, pose in front of a cool colored smoke explosion- y'know, the things Henshin Rider does best!
I've got my eye on you- can't wait to see more chapters!
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hehe great drawings hehe
gotta feel sorry for henshin rider on this one... he's being attacked!
FANFICTION REVIEW:
Not bad for a first fanfic! Henshin Rider's characterization is more or less spot-on, though you lose a point or two for self-inserts/Mary Sues ;). Next time, try and let HR have a little fun! Kick a mecha-butt or two, pose in front of a cool colored smoke explosion- y'know, the things Henshin Rider does best!
I've got my eye on you- can't wait to see more chapters!