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Webcomic Transcription
Building Greatness
panel 1: Chef Alistair places the pepperoni...
So the three chefs began their work...
panel 2: Chef Marvello is concentrating..
Each using their skills...
panel 3: The boy kneads the dough...
To make the ultimate pizza!
panel 4: Alistair tosses the dough!
The crowd swooned as chef alistair tossed the dough!
panel 5: Marvello dashes on the sauce
They gasped as chef marvello expertly poured the sauce!
panel 6: The boy tastes his creation....
No one paid much attention to the boy. He just wasn’t as flashy or exciting as the other chefs.
panel 7: And puts the pizza into the brick oven...
But he preferred it that way.








I deny your fictional audience and replace it with the real one. We're ALL paying attention to the boy (in a totally non-creepy way).
*jaws theme music* tehehehee
Go go go!!!
*cheers* I bet that pizza would taste so awesome... *drools* :p
OMP, I almost forget this was only a story in a book that Kana is reading to "Nemu" This could be a whole storyline on its own- COOL!
Yeah, it has this whole Kujibiki Unbalance Metafiction-like thing going on. Even the art style seems different somehow. I'd actually like to see a new comic or something drawn this way.
I know what you mean- I'm so used to seeing the pups drawn. I just love all these comics though, fantasticly done!
OOOH! I am sooo excited! I wonder what Anpan is feeling.
OMP, this page is making me so HUUUUUUUNGRY!!! (And I just ate my dinner!)
I can totally imagine this fairy tale turning into an epic adventure, complete with a quest, perhaps for the legendary Golden Cheese to complete the pizza?
does the boy preffers it that way because he wont be distracted? :3
omp! i feel hungry! :P
Lol I'm just going to say OMP!!!
The boy MUST WIN! :D