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Fit For A King
panel 1: The clock shows 5 o'clock.
When the clock struck five-
panel 2: The three chefs present their pizzas!
The three chefs presented their creations...
panel 3: The King sits on his throne...
To his Royal Majesty! The King sat stoically in his throne... waiting to see which chef would step forward first.
panel 4: Alistair cuts the pizza.
Chef Alistair knew this was his chance to make a good first impression.
panel 5: The King seems exited at the sight of the pizza!
“This pizza is fit for a king” he thought to himself.
panel 6: The King takes a bite...
panel 7: He chews...
panel 8: and swallows.








Oh my pizza! Now I really want pizza! D:
until this point I still think that boy really looks like Anpan! ;D
Ooooooh!!! A cliff~hangar!!!
the king ish tasting :O
The face in the last panel tells me the, the King ish dishpleased.
Displeasement...tsk tsk tsk
AHH the suspense!
*drools* i'm gonna eat my leftover pizza now O.O
Omp, I saw this write after I threw some pizza in the oven, lol. I love a good cliffhanger- I bet he king will hate it though.... :(
could the King be Anpan? i mean...he has the moustache and the eyebrows that look like Anpan's 'intense' features...and the boy's scarf is there to MAKE us believe he's Anpan...huh?
ooh, i think the king's anpan and the boy is nemu, but i'm not sure. :)
My Rule of Pizza Edibility: It's only bad if you can't keep it down. ;-)
And that's why he's called CLIFF HANGER...
i want pizza now!!!
the suspense is killing me!!!
I was hoping it'd be "King Anpan" or "King Nemu" but nope, guess not.
The pizza looks too busy. Too many flavors that will all clash in combination. Too much of a good thing y'know? Like making a mustard-cheese-peanut butter-tuna-frenchfry-cookie-sandwich. All of those things are awesome, but not in combo.
P.S. I just realized that everyone in this story wears a scarf of some kind. Awesome fashion in this kingdom eh?
Is it just me, or is the face of teh clock in this world weird? The XII existed twice. Oh and keep up the good work on Nemu nemu.
Haven't you heard of Double Midnight and Second Noon? (Okay, I'm making stuff up but it sounds cool right?)
Not only that, but it's actually striking VII. (7)
For the second time.
OMP- We laughed SO hard last night after reading these comments. XD;;;
Goes to show where my brain current is right now. Not working. LOL!
I was going to fix it immediately, but thought to just leave it for now. It's too good to fix. XD;
These latest series of pages have been instant classics. Pretty much like Insects Corp vs. the Neo-Black Widows on my webcomic.
Random but I really like how the steam breaks the border of the panel. Just great panel and great layout on the page. If you ever wondered about doing things besides 4-koma, imho you certainly can :)