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Final Judgement
panel 1: The King takes another bite!
The King: summon my daughter! if you think i’m a tough judge...
panel 2: His daughter arrives...
The King: wait until you meet my daughter... THE PRINCESS!
The Princess: Papa?
panel 3: and appears by the King's side.
The King: ah! there you are! Come my dear- i want you to choose which you like the best!
panel 4: She looks at the first pizza...
The Princess: hmm... it’s got yucky stuff on it!
panel 5: She looks at the second pizza...
The Princess: eww! is this pizza?
panel 6: She looked at the final pizza and declared...
The Princess: ooh! this one!
panel 7: The Princess took a bite...
panel 8: and...
panel 9: she looked pleased!








Om nom nom, delicious!
Awww, the princess is adorable!
Sometimes a "normal" pizza is the best one!
Epic twist! <3 You guys rock!
Cute princess! <3
i totally did not see this coming. :D
she's adorable. can't wait 'til the next page! :)
Lol... The princess is sooo cute!!!
I know! she is super cute!
DUDE PEPPERONI PIZZA :O The best pizza EVAR :D
Princesh ish cute! n.n
I'm sorry to say, it was obvious from the start that the boy would win.
yeah..so? lol its still enjoyable to read , right? :)
It was pretty obvious to me too. xD
I've seen quite a few stories that end like this already. But either way, it was still enjoyable, and that's all that matters, right? =D
LOL soooo THAT was his motive! AWWW she's cute. yay!
SHES ADORABLE! so cute! and shes a good judge!
EPIC WIN!!!
(Lol, what a cute little girl!)
Btw, I don't know if its just me but, I keep forgetting this is a story in a storyline of Kana and "Nemu" haha
I know what you mean~ Although this particular story is only about 13 pages, that's a whole month's deviation from the story at hand. XD; It might make more sense when read all together from chapter start to chapter end.
I always wonder what would be the best way to tell a short story in this tri-weekly format without dragging things out too long.
In your opinions, did this story feel too long? (The fairy tale officially ends on Friday~ XD)
I liked the length of the story right now, but I prefer the length of, say, the Sam short story. Good job on the art, and the dedication to keep on schedule for over 3 years!
It was long enough to be interesting, yet it was short enough to... not feel so dragged out. I think two more weeks of this would have been a little long... but a story of this length is fine.
I liked it! It was an neat deviation from the regular strips. I hope we can see what happened between Anise and Nemu concerning the "switch" when we get back to regular nemu nemu comics.
I actually enjoyed the deviation a lot. It's a a little long but any shorter and all drama would've ceased IMO. Calling it 'long', to me is like taking "The Three Little Pigs" and talking about it length-wise to "War and Peace". (In other words, it's fine as is).
I don't mind the length. Heck, *any* story with pizza and adorable princesses is fine by me!
Great story line! and the drawings match the theme. Excellent work, but I do miss Nemu and Anpan...
Thanks! It's a "short" (read: kinda long when updated M-W-F... but short in the book) deviation from the usual strips. XD; No worries - the pups will be back next week. XD
~~ or a little later today in the East Oahu Sun strip I'll be updating shortly into the gallery. XD
AAAW!!! SHE'S SO KAWAII!!!
haha kitsy ftw!!
To satisfy those who missed the pups during the month (myself included),maybe you could show Anpan's reaction to the story while Kana (and the rest of us) are reading it; for example, in every fourth page of the story, the last panel could show Anpan's expression and cute comment... Or would that disrupt the flow of the story?
Either way, I really liked this month-long storytime; how can anyone not love a pizza fairytale? ^^
Good point! Scott had the same idea~ I was just trying to figure out how to best implement Anpan's (and Kana's) commentary~ *ponder*
I'll keep this in mind for the next time~!
Thanks for all the feedback on this particular chapter~! :D
"Is this pizza?"
Why does this sound like yet another blow in the NY vs Chicago style pizza wars?
That princess is cute XP Well, now he wins... YAY!
That pizza looks so gooey and yummy. You've just made me hungry. ^_^
D'aaaawwww… she's so cute! xD
OM NOM NOM! Princess has same hairstyle as me <3 I feel so fulfilled
I adore the look on the Princess's face in the second panel. She's so cute! XD
A regular pizza is the best... :3